Hi there Julia, My name is Maddison I am a student from park estate school in room 11 I was impressed by your limerick poems because I've never heard of them before. One thing I have been wondering is on your first poem when you said 'But the he ate too much and then turned very duch' You dont start off a sentence with 'and.' Lastly what does it mean when you said 'and then he turned very duch' What was that supposed to mean? Next time do you think you could give us a explanation to what you are doing.
Hi there Julia,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a student from park estate school in room 11 I was impressed by your limerick poems because I've never heard of them before. One thing I have been wondering is on your first poem when you said 'But the he ate too much and then turned very duch' You dont start off a sentence with 'and.' Lastly what does it mean when you said 'and then he turned very duch' What was that supposed to mean? Next time do you think you could give us a explanation to what you are doing.
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~Maddison~
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